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Equivalent Exchange...
It was the law I thought Alphonse and I could live by,
and resurrect our beloved mother,
see her smile one more time...
But wait...
Who is Alphonse?
Who is my true mother?
Why did her smiles make me feel warm and comfortable?
I woke up, blood surrounding my body.
Ouch, my head hurts.
I put my arm in front of my eyes,
which fought against my heavy eyelids.
I saw a red tattoo all over my wrist.
Is this really my arm?
I was greeted by a guy with green, stringy hair,
and an old guy with blond hair and glasses.
Why do I not remember these people?
The guy with the weird hairstyle lend me his hand,
and pulled me up until I could balance on my two feet.
Ouch, It hurts to stand up.
My vision temporarily gave up,
as my head was recovering from getting up too fast.
"Envy, take him home."
The blond man said to the guy who helped me up.
The guy named Envy took my weak arm,
put it over his shoulders,
and helped me walk home.
Where are they taking me?
"Relax, Chibi-san, you're going home." Envy assured.
"Home?" I whispered.
"Yes, you are now one of us.
"A Homonculus,
"Your new name is now...
"Pride."
Three years have passed.
I haven't grown an inch at all,
or feel myself grow older.
This feeling is strange...
What's happening to my body?
I turned to Envy,
who stood next to me on a mountain,
which overlooked the city of Amestries.
I asked the words that were haunting my mind for three years;
"What is a Homonculus?"
"It's a created human from Transmutation who cannot age," was the reply.
"You were the person who gave up your body, in order to resurrect Pride,
"A homonculus who never had a body that matched his name,
"Until now...
"Even if I cannot see how you are the best choice..."
"What was my body like before I became Pride?"
"You were a State Alchemist.
You attemped Human Transmutation- what is forbidden-
to resurrect your mother," Envy told me.
"Did I succeed?"
"Nope. Not a chance. No one who attemped a forbidden act hardly succeeds.
"You lost a leg, while your younger brother, Alphonse, lost his body."
The name Alphonse sounded so familiar...
"You gave up your right arm for your brother's soul,
"and bonded it to armor." Envy went on.
"Where is Alphonse now?" I asked, curious on how to see my "brother."
"Don't know. I heard he disappeared.
"No one in the city seemed to see him after the day we made you Pride."
"Now, what do we do now?" I looked at the purple clouds in the yellow-ish sky.
"I don't know," Envy confessed.
"Maybe it's time to go back."
"Yeah, we'll be late..." Envy and I got up and walked towards home.
I will meet you again, Alphonse.
I will see who my brother looked like,
and you'll be happy to know that I'm alive,
and not dead,
like our mother...
I will meet you soon,
Someday,
And we will find a way,
a way to make this world a better place,
and not suffer from Equivalent Exchange....
It was the law I thought Alphonse and I could live by,
and resurrect our beloved mother,
see her smile one more time...
But wait...
Who is Alphonse?
Who is my true mother?
Why did her smiles make me feel warm and comfortable?
I woke up, blood surrounding my body.
Ouch, my head hurts.
I put my arm in front of my eyes,
which fought against my heavy eyelids.
I saw a red tattoo all over my wrist.
Is this really my arm?
I was greeted by a guy with green, stringy hair,
and an old guy with blond hair and glasses.
Why do I not remember these people?
The guy with the weird hairstyle lend me his hand,
and pulled me up until I could balance on my two feet.
Ouch, It hurts to stand up.
My vision temporarily gave up,
as my head was recovering from getting up too fast.
"Envy, take him home."
The blond man said to the guy who helped me up.
The guy named Envy took my weak arm,
put it over his shoulders,
and helped me walk home.
Where are they taking me?
"Relax, Chibi-san, you're going home." Envy assured.
"Home?" I whispered.
"Yes, you are now one of us.
"A Homonculus,
"Your new name is now...
"Pride."
Three years have passed.
I haven't grown an inch at all,
or feel myself grow older.
This feeling is strange...
What's happening to my body?
I turned to Envy,
who stood next to me on a mountain,
which overlooked the city of Amestries.
I asked the words that were haunting my mind for three years;
"What is a Homonculus?"
"It's a created human from Transmutation who cannot age," was the reply.
"You were the person who gave up your body, in order to resurrect Pride,
"A homonculus who never had a body that matched his name,
"Until now...
"Even if I cannot see how you are the best choice..."
"What was my body like before I became Pride?"
"You were a State Alchemist.
You attemped Human Transmutation- what is forbidden-
to resurrect your mother," Envy told me.
"Did I succeed?"
"Nope. Not a chance. No one who attemped a forbidden act hardly succeeds.
"You lost a leg, while your younger brother, Alphonse, lost his body."
The name Alphonse sounded so familiar...
"You gave up your right arm for your brother's soul,
"and bonded it to armor." Envy went on.
"Where is Alphonse now?" I asked, curious on how to see my "brother."
"Don't know. I heard he disappeared.
"No one in the city seemed to see him after the day we made you Pride."
"Now, what do we do now?" I looked at the purple clouds in the yellow-ish sky.
"I don't know," Envy confessed.
"Maybe it's time to go back."
"Yeah, we'll be late..." Envy and I got up and walked towards home.
I will meet you again, Alphonse.
I will see who my brother looked like,
and you'll be happy to know that I'm alive,
and not dead,
like our mother...
I will meet you soon,
Someday,
And we will find a way,
a way to make this world a better place,
and not suffer from Equivalent Exchange....
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FMA taught me
To never give up
No matter what people say
Or how high the obstacle
Or how deep the pain
Just keep going
FMA taught me
To value friendship
To cherish it for as long as you can
To not be afraid to lean on someone
To let them help me achieve my dreams
Hold them close
FMA taught me
To pursue my dreams
It may take a while to get there
But that's ok
I know in my heart I'll make it
that's all it takes
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To see it in my everyday life
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Will be worth it in the end
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He hates me.
Deep down, I know he does.
No matter how much he says he doesn't
I know.
I would hate me too.
I do hate me too.
He's disappointed in me.
He can say he's not all he wants.
It was my idea after all.
I am disappointed in me.
He regrets listening to me.
He tries to make me feel better
By saying he doesn't.
I can see he does.
Its my fault.
I regret listening to me.
He wants to get my body back
More than he wants his back.
Why?
Doesn't he know I'm supposed
To take care of him?
I fail as an older brother.
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1. Go to the top of your roof and yell "I'm a special boy!" at the top of his lungs
2. Dance with a coconut
3. Do a crack Mustang cosplay
4. Kick a kitten
5. Have a tea party with an Ed plushie
6. Become Risembool's first male cheerleader
7. Run through Central screaming "The British are coming! The British are coming!"
8. Belly Dance with Edward
9. Dance around without a shirt on in public
10. Go ontop of a hill and yell "I'm Naruto Uzumaki, and I'm gonna be Hokage, BELIEVE IT!"
11. Start talking in a Jamacian accent
12. Dress up like Envy just to make Ed mad
13. Jump on the bed and yell "I have ADD!
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I was influenced by Bluebird's Illusion, the FMA Fangame of Ed-Pride. I don;'t know if I'll make a sequel to this...
It's KIND OF like the story of BBI, but yet I tried my best to make it seem like my own.
So I do NOT own the story that INFLUENCED me on making this.
It's KIND OF like the story of BBI, but yet I tried my best to make it seem like my own.
So I do NOT own the story that INFLUENCED me on making this.
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I rather like it.